If Only I (a middle grade short story)

David Rodeback
23 min readJun 20, 2021
young girl with blonde hair and blue eyes
Photo credits: Janko Ferlič on Unsplash

Henry! Come up to dinner! Lights out on your way.” Mom was always going on about the electric bill.

“Two minutes, Mom.” I crossed out what I had just written and tried again.

I watched you wipe a tear away 
And smile, when

“Wipe” was wrong. And “watched” and “when.” I changed them all, then hurriedly scrawled the rest of the lines that had formed…

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David Rodeback

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